(。◕‿◕。) ;I y a a a a a a a; ☆.•° ([info]kumaguro4303) wrote,
@ 2008-04-15 16:11:00
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Entry tags:fan: fiction, fandom: super junior, hyukhae is crazy love

★032 → Hold On (Let Go), Hyukjae/Donghae
Title: Hold On (Let Go)
Author: [info]kumaguro4303 
Chapter: One-shot
Genre: Angst/Drama
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Hyukjae x Donghae, Junsu x Hyukjae
Warning(s): Slight cursing
Summary: Donghae is smiling (dying).



“Ah, it’s so tiring!”

“It really is~” (That’s because you’ve been playing with Junsu all day.)

“I’m so happy. I got casted in this new drama~ too bad it’s with Junsu.”

“Why?” (Too bad? Bastard. I know you’ve been sleeping with Junsu for 2 months now.)

“Well, I wanted it to be with you.”

“Really…” (And to think it has only been 2 and a half months since we started going out.)

“C’mon, baby, aren’t you happy for me?”

“Of course I am!” (I don’t know.)

“But why aren’t you smiling?”

“See, I’m smiling now!” (Because I’m dying.)

“That’s more like it! You look better when you’re smiling.”

“Hee, thanks.” (You love Junsu better.)

“By the way have you heard Junsu-”

“Wait, Hyuk, when will we tell the others and the fans about our relationship?” (Junsu again.)

“Hmm, for now, let’s stick with the skinship. That’ll tell them gradually.”

“Oh, uhm, okay then.” (I’ve heard you talking to Junsu, saying that you’re just using me for the popularity of skinship.)

“But don’t forget that you’re the only one for me, Hae.”

“That’s so sweet, Hyukkie.” (You’re a liar.)

“Nobody can ever replace you.”

“I feel the same way.” (Nobody can ever replace you.)

“I love you.”

“I love you, too.” (I love you.)

Notes: T^T Now, that was short. D: It’s my first time writing a story with just dialogues. So uhm yeah DX I don’t like how it turned out. AND I’M SORRY BECAUSE I KILLED EUNHAE… AGAIN. D:



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[info]cornelia_scoops
2008-04-15 08:57 am UTC (link)
Aww, bad Eunhyuk~if Hae's assumptions were right. And Hae, HOMG it's pretty heartbreaking. Especially because Hae was keeping it all in and just.. T_T

Love this~

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-15 04:34 pm UTC (link)
OHNOES D: Hyukkie isn't bad. <33 BUT I MADE HIM ONE DD:

Thank you. ♥

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[info]dynamite12
2008-04-15 09:20 am UTC (link)
Eunhae fics are <3
poor Donghae!! he shouldnt be tret like that =[ Eunhyuk you player!
This fic is gooooood =D

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-15 04:35 pm UTC (link)
They are, they are <3
YES, how can someone hurt a person as adorkable as him?! D:

Thanks so much for reading~~ :D

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[info]leeaeyoung
2008-04-15 09:55 am UTC (link)
WOW... that was short but pretty deep.

And I love the ending how it was only an I LOVE YOU, instead of I LOVE YOU TOO... poor donghae...

wonderful fic ♥

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-15 04:36 pm UTC (link)
YAY for getting that one~~

Thank you for reading :D

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[info]shmegzo
2008-04-15 10:04 am UTC (link)
I'LL SAVE MY SPOT? D:
I'm just in college atm so i'll read when i get home >>;
*runs* ilu X3 ♥

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[info]shmegzo
2008-04-15 01:02 pm UTC (link)
...WHY WOULD YOU BREAK THE HYUKHAE ;O;
OH DONGHAE ♥

This was so sad ;o;! But i liked the writing style~

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-15 04:38 pm UTC (link)
I AM SO SORRY T^T But broken!Eunhae is sometimes good, y/n? D:

Thank you <33

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[info]g_myzo
2008-04-15 11:10 am UTC (link)
love the ending because even though he knows all this, what he said was still the truth.

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-15 04:42 pm UTC (link)
Poor Hae DDD:

Thank you♥

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[info]ryou_no_baka
2008-04-15 12:32 pm UTC (link)
Guh, ouch, somehow that makes me want to kick Hyukkies ass...
it's so depressing to see how Donghae know all about hyukkies cheating but can't let him go...

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-15 04:39 pm UTC (link)
No~~ Hyukkie's too precious for that, let's kick his peen instead. *is killed* Kidding kidding~~

Yeah, I remember Hae saying that when he loves someone who doesn't love him back he'd still keep going to see the girl. Haeee. ;-; ♥

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[info]chiphyuk
2008-04-15 02:59 pm UTC (link)
Why do I like broken!HyukHae?! DX *smacks self* UGHUGH. It breaks my heart, but these are the fics that I love... D:

Awesome. ♥ Loved it a lot.

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-15 04:40 pm UTC (link)
OMG I can't resist writing broken!Hyukhae, too. DDD:

♥ Thank you ♥ And your icon makes me giddy and happy and all kinds of fangirly stuff ♥

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[info]chiphyuk
2008-04-15 06:43 pm UTC (link)
Hee, thank you! And you should write more! And... I should write some more too. >>;

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-16 09:29 am UTC (link)
YES YOU SHOULD! BUT I SHOULDN'T BECAUSE I AM A MAJOR FAIL DDX

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[info]panda3035
2008-04-15 10:13 pm UTC (link)
oh...so sad. poor donghae..go use yunho donghae!

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-16 09:30 am UTC (link)
OHNOES, but what about Jaejoong? *gets killed*

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[info]miharusan
2008-04-15 11:13 pm UTC (link)
Nuuuuuu~~ Eunhae. ;O; <3
Poor Donghae. Hyukkie is so insensitive. Dx
Haha, nice lil' dialogue fic. :3
Write moooooarrr ficcsss~~

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-16 09:31 am UTC (link)
I am sorry for killing the Eunhae. ;O;

I'll try X3 and thank you for reading♥

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[info]fading_sun_sock
2008-04-16 12:42 am UTC (link)
ALSDKFJASD WHY DOES EUNHAE HAVE TO BE SO ANGSTY?! SOMEONE NEEDS TO WRITE SOME GOOD SMUTTY HYUKSUHAE OR SOMETHING TO MAKE UP FOR ALL OF THIS SADNESS! But seriously, this was beautiful and heartbreaking and plzdon'tletitberealisticbecauseHAE!

ilu. ♥

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-16 09:32 am UTC (link)
ASXDHFTGJMVNFJ!!!YESPLZ SOMEONE SHOULD WRITE SMUTTY HYUKSUKIHAE~ LOL BCOZ THAT WOULD BE HOT. everyone dies when Hae is hurt~~ thank you~~ <3

ilumoaaaar♥

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[info]music_loner
2008-04-16 01:11 am UTC (link)
wow that was amazing i liked it a lot
wow all dialogue and yet it said so much...

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-16 09:32 am UTC (link)
thank you so much~~ ♥

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[info]daomoua2
2008-04-17 10:13 am UTC (link)
Ah HSsssshhh ><;

dude I remember reading a yoosu/hyuksu/eunhae/yunhae/yunjae fic once... it was so fired up.. that fic nearly made me have split personality... all 6 of them love triangle problem..donghae & hyukkie being players they're so bad... but I'm glad the fic ended well with eunhae as a couple...

I hate hyuksu so much... xD;;

I'm glad this dialouge is not that ...detailed? xD so simple.. I like it..

hyukkie you bad boy!

Sungminnie clearly states fishy <3 U... do yourself a favor and return his feelings for reals... >.>;

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[info]kumaguro4303
2008-04-17 01:37 pm UTC (link)
DDD: THAT'S SO COMPLICATED! A LOVE HEXAGON :D *shoots self*

XDD!! Bestfriends!HyukSu is fine, yes? :D

GUH that's because I am weak at details. DD: I FAIL.

Sungminnie? LOL XDD; *slow slow*

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[info]ayakabun
2008-05-11 11:02 am UTC (link)
this is so cute XD

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